HALの作文をみてくれてた先生が留学のため半年お休み。
どうしようかなあ…。ネットの添削サービス、試してみようかなあ…。
格安英文添削・英文チェック IDIY アイディー
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試してみた！ネイティブの添削で1ワード8.9～12円。この分量で98ワード872～1176円。たった3時間で添削されて戻ってきた！結構、いいんじゃない～？
I read some book. And I like story about animals.
I read some books, and I like stories about animals.
First, I started from the easy book like ABC and I read little hard book.
First, I started from an easy book, like the ABC’s, and then I read a more difficult book.
Then, I read lot of books and lean how to spell.
Then, I read lots of books and learned how to spell.
Sometimes my mother says “I give you 50yen when you read a book.”
Sometimes my mother says “I will give you 50 yen when you read a book.”
So I’m reading a lot of books some books are so long and some books are short.
So, I’m reading a lot of books, some books are so long and some books are short.
It is so much fun.
It is so much fun.
My favorite book is “geronimo stilton” because the mouse call “geronimo stilton” is so funny and story is adventure and I like an adventure story.
My favorite book is “geronimo stilton” because the mouse called “geronimo stilton” is so funny and the story is an adventure, and I like adventure stories.
And have “geronimo stilton” series and I’m enjoying reading.
I have the “geronimo stilton” series, and I’m enjoying reading it.
It is a long story but it is so fun.
It is a long story, but it is so fun.
Now, I’m reading “shipwreck on the pirate islands”.
Now, I’m reading “shipwreck on the pirate island.”
